How did Jack manage to land in amongst all the bamboo without being impaled?
The root of your writing whsilt appearing agreeable initially, did not really work well with me personally after some time. Someplace within the paragraphs you were able to make me a believer unfortunately just for a very short while. I still have a problem with your leaps in assumptions and one would do nicely to fill in those breaks. In the event that you actually can accomplish that, I would surely be fascinated.
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